ENGL 102 - Stewart - Spring 2024

Definition of a Thesis Statement

A thesis statement should be specific and make a clear, definable and arguable claim.  For the literary research paper, a thesis statement may suggest a particular way of reading or understanding a story, perhaps providing an original or even controversial interpretation. 

The thesis may focus on an analysis of one of the elements of fiction, drama, poetry or nonfiction as expressed in the work: character, plot, structure, idea, theme, symbol, style, imagery, tone, etc.

Basically, the thesis is a road map for the paper—it tells the reader what to expect. A good thesis is specific, limited in scope, and offers a perspective or interpretation on a subject. It: 

• Focus on specific attribute(s) of the text(s).

• Make a specific, arguable point (thesis) about these attributes.

• Defend this point with reasons and evidence drawn from the text and secondary sources.

Common Patterns of a Thesis Statement

1. In (title of work), (author) (illustrates, shows) (aspect) (adjective). 
   • Example: In “Barn Burning,” William Faulkner shows the characters Sardie and Abner Snopes struggling for their identity.
2. In (title of work), (author) uses (one aspect) to (define, strengthen, illustrate) the (element of work). 
   • Example: In “Youth,” Joseph Conrad uses foreshadowing to strengthen the plot.
3. In (title of work), (author) uses (an important part of work) as a unifying device for (one element), (another element), and (another element). The number of elements can vary from one to four.
   • Example: In “Youth,” Joseph Conrad uses the sea as a unifying device for setting, structure and theme.

Examples Theses

Example 1:

In “A Worn Path,” Eudora Welty creates a fictional character in Phoenix Jackson whose determination, faith, and cunning illustrate the indomitable human spirit.

Note that the work, author, and character to be analyzed are identified in this thesis statement. The thesis relies on a strong verb (creates). It also identifies the element of fiction that the writer will explore (character) and the characteristics the writer will analyze and discuss (determination, faith, cunning).

Example 2:

The character of the Nurse in Romeo and Juliet serves as a foil to young Juliet, delights us with her warmth and earthy wit, and helps realize the tragic catastrophe.

The works of ecstatic love poets Rumi, Hafiz, and Kabir use symbols such as a lover’s longing and the Tavern of Ruin to illustrate the human soul’s desire to connect with God.

Adapted from Perimeter College, TX Weslyan LibGuide, Dalton State LibGuide, UTA LibGuide.